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Dragonball TBNL Cover : Like Father Like Sons

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This drawing is a Comic that me and SuperDragonDBZ are doing together it is a fan fiction comic that we will write to together. He and I are writing the story together and I will draw the comic. Anyway I really am glad of the outcome of the picture if you don't know the characters here is there order left to right Shun is Legendary Super Sayian, Broca in  Legendary Sayian Slayer , and Takeru is his Heavens Unleashed Demon. I think you guys can guess who's at the top the original Legendary Super Sayian himself BROLY! This is basically what Sayian Slayer would look like the differentiate depending on the hair style and the other DNA of the being may affect the instinct of the being and certain looks on the face but this isn't the drawing and time. I'm really happy what the outcome and I can't wait to start drawing the comic and I can't wait to see what you guys say and I can't wait for you guys to see the first chapter of our story get posted on SuperDragonDBZ page.

                                              -Oreo is dippin
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Overall it came out pretty good,I like they way you have the face ontop and then you have the other characters below. Critiques are not mean to be all about the good so lets focus on the bad. Remember,this is not meant to hurt your feelings in anyway, but only for you to get better at it. So first the man in the middle,I shee how his hands are folded,It needs to be more(don't know how to say it) more straight. And you need to work on you side angles a little bit more,they are pretty good but the could use some more work. To make it easier on you,you could make the character not all the way to the side but like this(fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/201… it on a angle that you could see both eyes. Sorry for the somewhat short and harsh Critique. Waiting to see you improve... P.s I love the way you did the letters <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>